Please highlight P L A Y in parties, learning, art, and yoga! Change the color in those letters so the acronym is more obvious! PLAY should be in all caps.
TRY to put an ASPEN LEAF somewhere in the design, (possibly dipped in paint, with dripping baby aspen leaves. Like in my sketch...BUT I AM NOT MARRIED TO THIS IDEA!!!!)
I also want to see some neat use of NEGATIVE SPACE.
Let's try to incorporate someone or 2 people doing an intertwined (man and woman/boy and girl) tree pose for the Y in PLAY. But again, I AM NOT MARRIED TO THIS IDEA!!!
I want to see your creations before incorporating my ideas!
Let this logo tell a story.
THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK.